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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Tuesday, 6 December 2016

animal Racing

Animal Racing!
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It is the 2016 Pt England animal race. This is not a normal race! In this race you get to ride whatever animal you want.    
Write a crazy story about this animal race that you and your friends had. Write about what animal you chose to race with and what animal your friends picked.
Then what happened during the race?
Did anything crazy happen?
Who won?


On Friday morning  our teacher Mr Baxendine Told us to bring our Pets to school. And i said why then he said because we are going to have a pet race. An i said oooh so that explains why there is a track on the field. On Monday morning we were going to start  the race i brang my fastest pet a hippo when my race started my pet was running fast as then he past the finish line then he got medal.

Thursday, 24 November 2016

The crazy motat adventure.narrative writing

      One day at Pt England School  Team 4 had a trip to Motat. And The Teachers said we are going to have fun today. Then a Guy came because we were going to Motat he said what do you feel like about the trip and I said gay.He said that's kinda  dope and I said yeah when we got to Motat they said find a partner and I picked Leonardy and he said  bring Stephen Curry which Is his Uncle. And I said to Stephen curry ima fan of your Basketball Team Golden State Warriors. and he said cool because he is the 3rd best player in the world.     


and i said check properly and he did and he was grabbed and I saw someone was throwing webs at Stephen Curry and Leonardy and It was a giant spider he was shooting webs out of Its place where they do their webs. and I dodged them all Then I saw zombies at the door and I tried finding a gun and I said I know there weakness I said is getting Shot in the mouth.






Then when I found my gun I killed the giant spider.  I saved my friends and I Gave them a gun because there was heaps of zombies and we were shooting. And there were still coming so I found a bazooka in my bag and then I shoot It all and then water  came out of them because I knew that Zombies blood were water.

Thursday, 17 November 2016

Athletics Day 2016

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: Write a recount.


On one sunny morning at pt England school  It was a cool day because it was athletics day. We went to the hard court near the field and there were spark and college kids there they helped us with the athletics.



We got to go To 100M sprints I came 2 place but we had a 75 meter race first and i  came 4 place but when i did the 100m i came 2 place again. After we did 100m sprints We did discus there were to lines 1 was to have a try and the other one was to  compete in a competition .






The activity i choses was high jump it was fun and hard. When i was jumping i slipped then i  fell on the pole I was laughing and miss king said i was a princess i said i will make it on the next  one and i made it.




My favorite part about the athletics was listening to music and Having fun outside for one day.


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Monday, 17 October 2016

my little boat

Once upon a time my family and my friends went on a trip to the beach.  We were going to the beach because my dad wanted to go fishing. When we all got on the boat everyone forgot to get a life jacket. But i was the only one that had a life jacket Then i told my Dad did you bring a fishing rod and he said oo shot i forgot the fishing rod. Then i told him that i have a spear fishing rod.  



Then i told my Dad where are we going and he said to the atlantic ocean and i panic. Suddenly my Dad said don’t worry about son we will be safe and i told there is a lot of sharks and killer whales. And he said who cares about sharks and killer whales.



When we got to the atlantic ocean i saw something in the water it was so big it is bigger then the boat. Even my Dad saw it i said to him what is that and he said it is a killer whale then it when away and it came out of the big wave and made a big hole in the boat Then a hammerhead shark made a hole in the bottom of our boat so i said what are we going to do then my dad said we sucide or we all go and swim back to land. I picked with swim to land.




Before our boat sink all of them and me jumped off the boat and swim back to land. When we got back to land my Dad said i’m sorry everyone it was my fault that we almost died and everyone said it all right dad i liked that trip and everyone said the samething and we all went home and sleep.

Once upon a time my family and my friends went on a trip to the beach.  We were going to the beach because my dad wanted to go fishing. When we all got on the boat everyone forgot to get a life jacket. But i was the only one that had a life jacket Then i told my Dad did you bring a fishing rod and he said oo shot i forgot the fishing rod. Then i told him that i have a spear fishing rod.  



Then i told my Dad where are we going and he said to the atlantic ocean and i panic. Suddenly my Dad said don’t worry about son we will be safe and i told there is a lot of sharks and killer whales. And he said who cares about sharks and killer whales.



When we got to the atlantic ocean i saw something in the water it was so big it is bigger then the boat. Even my Dad saw it i said to him what is that and he said it is a killer whale then it when away and it came out of the big wave and made a big hole in the boat Then a hammerhead shark made a hole in the bottom of our boat so i said what are we going to do then my dad said we sucide or we all go and swim back to land. I picked with swim to land.




Before our boat sink all of them and me jumped off the boat and swim back to land. When we got back to land my Dad said i’m sorry everyone it was my fault that we almost died and everyone said it all right dad i liked that trip and everyone said the samething and we all went home and sleep.

Friday, 26 August 2016

WINNING GOLD!

WALT: create mood in our writing. At the the Rio Olympics  2016 stadium.   When  I was on the podium i heard all of the fans of my country New Zealand.  I  saw a lot of  fireworks and the ground shaking like earthquake. It was so loud i cannot hear anything but i heard all the fireworks and the people stomping their feet on the ground then everyone started yelling at me saying go New Zealand.   

Friday, 19 August 2016

Kennedy Egg sprits

Nz Olympic mascot

My name is Jonathan the kiwi   I’m a 2016 Nz Olympics mascot I  am the fast mascot ever.   My favorite  thing as a mascot  to play rugby union.  I am also funny supportive. And i am friendly  he can also
 My special power i  can  fly.  And shot balls in the hoop  using fire. I can also spread joy using fizzy drinks. I can also make fire with my beak by shooting when i blow it up.: I  live in the forest. Were the trees are he lives inside a tree.  And a bush he is a kiwi that has power. Also i can make cartoons come true.

Wednesday, 3 August 2016

egg sprint race

On Monday  morning room 9 went to the park  where Mr Bax told as what to do  with our egg. We had to go put my egg on the spoon and go and sprint over one thing and  go under 1 thing.
my eggs name was Reedy . My egg came from jamaica my egg looked like are japanese. He had brown hair and a he had a white shirt.


mr bax told us what to do and he said ready get set go and i sprinted to the end and i dropped my egg. My egg had are little crack and i ran to the end i came first in the race.
eggs. My favorite part about the egg race was dropping our eggs.

Tuesday, 26 July 2016

we are the champion

Sadly the holidays on the first day of school  I walked  into school i went to go and hang my bag then i went to line up.  And go to the hall. the theme for the term is we are the champion. I found out about because mr bax and Mr Goodwin had flags on their back. Team 4 are learning about  the virus and drugs and why are people are not going to the Olympics. Mr somerville said we are going to do all the things that have not been solved. And the bugs in Rio called the zica. I am looking forward for this term is the Olympics. WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.
WALT: write a recount.

Wednesday, 6 July 2016

carrots writing

WALT: group ideas into paragraphs.  WALT: write a recount.

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        On Monday morning i saw carrots and i had idea.And i thought what  we were doing.  Rabbits is  coming then we went outside and i was happy then  there was no rabbits then Mr Bax said we are making friends out of carrots.

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Yesterday i went inside my class then i went outside.  I saw my class outside then Mr Baxendine gave us all a knife and a plate then we had to make a carrot man by carving with a knife. Mr Bax said we can design our own face hair and body.
JPEG Imagewhen we were making our carrots i took a picture of my carrots it had a and he had clothes on and had orange  back   and he had clothes on orange  back.


My favorite part was making the  carrots to people that was my favorite part.

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Tuesday, 31 May 2016

my superhero

Electric power. Here comes the newest hero night owl. Night can shoot lighting out from his finger and he can fly without anything on his back. His body is super strong and he is super tall then the strongest part of him his chest it is made out of metal. His hair is metal to he is very strong because his whole body is made out of metal. He got his powers from a gun made out of powers his  master shoot him and he got his powers to fly and shot lightning out of his finger.

Monday, 9 May 2016

kennedy speach marks

 1. put speach marks before and after the exact word thats been spoken.

  2. put a comma or a [! ? .]  betwen the speach marks and the words  that tells you who is talking.

3. always start the first word in the speach marks with a capital letter.


walt: use speach marks correctly  here are some ruels

Thursday, 7 April 2016

sense writing the messy room

I went to my sister's  room and I saw heaps of hamburgers and are mcchicken.  and smelly socks. And i saw something  on my bed i went to go and look at it but it was mountain dew because it was red. I said  how did mountain dew on  my bed i told someone to clean my  sisters room and i said hurry up and clean and i said hurry or i will tell you to get out and i will clean your room and she said ok. Then i saw dominos and i said what is that smell and it was her pile of stinky clothes   

Friday, 1 April 2016

the wild night

Last Tuesday I was at home  playing games. Then I heard the wind blowing my glass of water down then  heard thunder.  


It was 10 o'clock I creeped into my and went to sleep. I heard thunder and wind blowing my mirror and then I woke up and went to see what was happening down stairs. And I saw blue glowing eyes outside. Then it was my cat i remember that I gave him glow in the dark glass.



When I went to check what happen down stairs I smell something rotten and it was the rotten apples but it was in the bin then I said how did it get out of the bin. Then the wind was blowing the dishes on the ground. And again when I went back to sleep I heard my brother falling down from the bed then it started to stop being windy. When I woke up I got scared when I woke up last night it was so scary.